Your story is very funny but short. To make your story better I think you should make a longer story and have each character wait till the other character is finished talking.
Kia Ora Stanley, I enjoyed your animated story. It is very interesting and funny but short. you should make it longer and wait until the other character is talking. Thank you
Hi Stanley,
ReplyDeleteYour story is very funny but short. To make your story better I think you should make a longer story and have each character wait till the other character is finished talking.
Good Work
Davarni
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Stanley,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your animated story. It is very interesting and funny but short. you should make it longer and wait until the other character is talking.
Thank you