I am a Year 8 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs Tofa.
Hi Stanley,Great start to your story, but I suggest you add some sentences about what your story is about. Anyways keep up the good work!Davarni
Kia Ora Stanly,I think adding a dog is would of been very challenging but I think it worked really really well. I also liked you sprites and backdrops. Keep up the great work.Kind Regards,Telesia
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